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Fic: The Finish Line [Aug. 6th, 2006|12:35 am]
Minutes out of Hours


[Current Mood |sadsad]
[Current Music |Keane : Bedshaped]

Okay, so, first foray into the 24 fandom. Need all the feedback I can get. I totally cried my eyes out at 5x13 (and I really don't do that easily), so this is partially an outlet for my own angst. *sob*

Title: The Finish Line
Author: rangergirl
Rating: PG-13
Pairing: Jack/Tony (slashy or not, up to you.)
Warnings: Character death, but it's canon. The writers are evil.
Summary: Jack in the final moments of 5x13.
Disclaimer: Not mine.

He swallows, choking down panic. Forces his voice to be low and steady and soothing, even as his insides are knotting with dread and the room’s starting to spin around him.

[User Picture]From: mulefa
2006-08-11 11:48 am (UTC)
Loved it. Thanks for writing
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